A Secret Longing A Poem About Dimples

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By vocalcoach

I’m Falling…

Slowly… excitement grabs my heart, claiming my desire for him

Captivated by his smile, decorated with Sean Connery dimples

Full beckoning lips

I wonder how they would feel coming home to mine

 

See all 3 photos

I’m Falling…

He speaks, I hear a symphony

More please, more

My imagination speaks,

How would it feel to touch his fingers

The very same fingers that strum his guitar

I’m Falling…

His eyes call to me

with promises that cannot be

Two hearts unite but never take flight

Hidden words never spoken

Shattered images

 

 

I’m Falling…

He is King Arthur and Sir Lancelot, “with virtue to spare”

Though his head is bare where there once was hair

It matters not

It is a most beautiful crown

I am waiting to become Guinevere

Take me away

To Camelot

 

I’m falling…into sleep.

Deeper, deeper

His arms wrapped around me

I am bathed in his warmth

Like a bed of roses basking in the sun

I am complete.

Still, I am alone.

vocalcoach - copyright 2010

My Own Thoughts on Love

I believe that love is all around us. It cradles and soothes us when we need it the most. I find love as I look up. I look at the sky and it's vastness and feel love pouring down on me.

Life itself is full of love if we are open to it. We find it in nature, the pride of mother earth. We hear it in the laughter of children. Our animal friends and dogs especially are always ready to greet us with unconditional love. The song of a bird reminds us of how valuable we are.

The greates love of all is only a heart beat away. It comes from within. We carry it with us every single minute of every passing day.

And our very creator is love. How marvelous that is.

I believe the more love we give away to others and to every living thing on the planet, the more love we shall receive.

Thank you for being here.

If Ever I would leave you - Musical Camelot

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Falling in Love Again: Romantic Comedy in Contemporary Cinema
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Rod Stewart: If We Fall in Love Tonight
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Comments

carrie450 profile image

carrie450 16 months ago

Beautiful poetry vocalcoach along with the graphics.

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drbj Level 8 Commenter 16 months ago

"Sean Connery dimples," Audrey? You-re a goner, girl! Lovely, image-rich poetry. In addition to the graphics.

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Hmrjmr1 Level 3 Commenter 16 months ago

Well Done Lass!

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vocalcoach Hub Author 16 months ago

Oh, thank you Hmrjmr1! Do you have dimples?? :)

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vocalcoach Hub Author 16 months ago

drbj - You have found me out. Dimples delight me :)

Most thankful to you for your comments. You are such a jewel!

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vocalcoach Hub Author 16 months ago

carrie - I am delighted that you enjoyed my poem and the graphics. You always bring a smile to me when I see that you have dropped by. Thanyou. :)

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nighthag Level 4 Commenter 16 months ago

This was breathtaking, a beautiful piece full of emotion, loved every word

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Hello, hello, 16 months ago

Absolutely beautiful. Thank you for giving the pleasure or reading it.

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sofs Level 7 Commenter 16 months ago

Charming..aged love like wine... enjoyed it!!

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Micky Dee Level 4 Commenter 16 months ago

"Captivated by his smile, decorated with Sean Connery dimples" - I hope you get Sean Connery dimples!

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breakfastpop Level 8 Commenter 16 months ago

How lovely. Voted up and "beautiful".

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vocalcoach Hub Author 16 months ago

breakfastpop - If a man with "Sean Connery" dimples comes to the breakfast table looking for Guinevere, will you let me know? :) Thanks Pop!

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vocalcoach Hub Author 16 months ago

nighthag - It was you and your magnificent hub on " using your writing prompts" hub which inspired me to write this. You suggested a list of words, one of them being "I'm falling" with a compelling graphic. I immediately began working on your writing exercises and this poem is a result of following your instruction. Could it be, that you are my muse? Is it ok for a muse to be of the same gender? :) Thank you so much for the gift you have given to me. You have unlocked a door which has been closed until now.

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dallas93444 Level 6 Commenter 16 months ago

Great work!

More...

Flag up and awesome!

rx4u 16 months ago

Vocalcoach- Wow! King Arthur, Sir Lancelot ..AND...Sean Connery dimples? Move over girlfriend, I think I'm falling too! Ha! Great post, great imagery and great photos! Voted up indeed! :)

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vocalcoach Hub Author 16 months ago

dallas93444 - Wow - these kinds of comments really inspire me. Thank you again and again dallas! :_)

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vocalcoach Hub Author 16 months ago

Micky - Well, I haven't yet, but I always have my dreams right? It's kind of puzzling - what attracts one person physically to another. It isn't just the dimples, it's what surrounds them - the profound words, high character, confidence and on and on. I'm just a hopeless romantic, Micky! Great to see you. :)

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vocalcoach Hub Author 16 months ago

rx42 - Well, there is certainly enough here to go around! :) And, may I say, you've got style rx42. What else do we have in common? I will just have to go to one of your hubs, check your profile and find out. Thanks for coming by. :)

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saddlerider1 Level 7 Commenter 16 months ago

Oh what a romanticist you are, how lovely. Yes Sean Connery has cornered the market on his famous dimples. He is most definitely a man's man and I have admired him as such as well as a wonderfully talented actor. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem, it stirred my heart and passions for romance. Hugs

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CMCastro Level 4 Commenter 16 months ago

If they gave out an academy award for hubs for the most elegantly written hub, you would Receive it! Bravo!

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Truckstop Sally Level 5 Commenter 16 months ago

Thanks for a beautiful hub. I saw Goulet in concert when I was 13 or so. Quite a presence.

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Doug Turner Jr. Level 3 Commenter 16 months ago

Fun stuff. Lighthearted. You get your point across without being too heavy-handed. And it seems as though everyone loves the Connery reference. Well done. Cheers.

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Cheri Schultz 16 months ago

Audrey: My darlin' - I am thinking you maybe writing about a secret admirer?? How eloquently and beautifully written. Love and peace to you my wonderful friend!!

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vocalcoach Hub Author 16 months ago

Cheri - Well...uh....mmmm....gosh....gee....shucks, now why would you be thinking that? :)

Thank you, my dear and precious Cheri. Love you, my friend.

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Healing Touch Level 1 Commenter 16 months ago

I love the poem,music and pictures. Great job. You made me miss love.

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vocalcoach Hub Author 16 months ago

Hello, hello - I am very glad that you liked my poem. I apprecrate your feedback as you are a wise lady. :)

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vocalcoach Hub Author 16 months ago

sofs - How kind of you to leave me such a nice comment. I am please that you read it. My best to you! :)

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vocalcoach Hub Author 16 months ago

Truckstop Sally - How wonderful that you were able to see him in person. I know you will never forget the experience of being right there with Mr. Goulet. Very glad to see you. Thanks for commenting!

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vocalcoach Hub Author 16 months ago

CMCastro - Wow! Now that is a great comment. :) Be careful - with encouragement like this, I just may write another poem. Really, 'tho, I so appreciate this. Thank you my friend and many blessings of love to you!

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vocalcoach Hub Author 16 months ago

saddlerider - well, you found me out. Oh, yes, I am indeed a romanticist. In every sense of the word. And it feels so "freeing" to let it all out on paper. I have a suspicion that you are, as well. (takes one to know one) :) I love your comments saddlerider. Blessings to you, dear man.

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vocalcoach Hub Author 16 months ago

Healing Touch - Yes, I miss it as well. :) So very nice to see you here. Please drop by again very soon. Thank you for your comment. Have a wonderful day.

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prasetio30 Level 8 Commenter 16 months ago

I am falling but landing in the land of love. That's your poem. This poem really touch my heart. Thanks for post stunning pictures, including a great video. I hope your "love message" would spread to the entire world. Good work, my friend. Have a nice day!

Prasetio

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acaetnna Level 6 Commenter 15 months ago

This is so lovely, really romantic and I just love it. The perfect utube to accompany this too, one of my Mum's favourite songs.Voting up and pressing your tabs.

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Green Lotus Level 6 Commenter 15 months ago

What lovely imagery! Beautiful.

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vocalcoach Hub Author 15 months ago

Doug Turner Jr - Thank you for your feedback on my poem. It means so much to me. I value your comments. Have a lovely day! :)

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Astra Nomik Level 6 Commenter 15 months ago

Love can be so inspiring. I'm glad I found this, Audrey. Great poem, and the tree image is lovely too. I love reading quality poetry.

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vocalcoach Hub Author 15 months ago

Astra - I very much want you to know that I appreciate your kind words about my poem. And I just love trees, so very much. Bless you in all you do and a big thanks!

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vocalcoach Hub Author 15 months ago

acaetnna - Makes me happy to know you enjoyed my hub. Ah - the wonderous feeling of falling in love. It's the best! And so are you. Thank you acaetnna and blessings to you!

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vocalcoach Hub Author 15 months ago

Dear Prasetio - I dream of spreading love to the whole world, as I know others do. You spread love to everyone and that is the greatest gift of all. Thank you, dearest friend. May your heart and life be filled with ecstacy!

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vocalcoach Hub Author 15 months ago

Green Lotus - I'm not always in a romantic mood, but I certainly was when I wrote this. :) I so much appreciate your lovely words. You always inspire me and have since the first hub I wrote - 8 months ago. Thank you GL for being you!

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WillStarr Level 8 Commenter 15 months ago

Well done!

I'll be back for more.

Voted up, beautiful, and awesome!

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writinginalaska Level 1 Commenter 15 months ago

Vocal, it is truly amazing how much this piece reminds me of my The Siren Song, same mindset, very similar flow, i love it. I was totally swept away again. Great job! i think i like yours better than mine ;)

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vocalcoach Hub Author 15 months ago

Oh, WillStarr, you give me such a smile. Thanks for "lighting up my life"!

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vocalcoach Hub Author 15 months ago

writinginalaska - Now I can hardley wait to read "The Siren Song" which I will do right now! And I think it is YOU who are "truly amazing". Thank you...I'm off to read your poem now!

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RealHousewife Level 8 Commenter 15 months ago

Amazing - amazing - amazing.

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Support Med. Level 3 Commenter 15 months ago

'Captivated by his smile, decorated with Sean Connery dimples

Full beckoning lips

I wonder how they would feel coming home to mine"

Now, now vocalcoach, you have gotten somethin' started here. Sean Connery is oh so fine and handsome and goodlooking no matter how much he ages.

Awesome poem, very emotionally exciting!! I need a drink of water now. v/r

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vocalcoach Hub Author 15 months ago

RealHousewife - Thankyou, thankyou, thankyou! :)

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vocalcoach Hub Author 14 months ago

Support Med. Hahahaha! Water won't help. Hahahaha. A cold shower, maybe. :) You are totally wonderful. Looking forward to another visit from you!

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Genna East Level 6 Commenter 14 months ago

The poetic words, photography and music blend together beautifully. Well done.

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vocalcoach Hub Author 13 months ago

Genna - You are one of my top favorites as a writer...your evaluation of my poem gives me a big smile!

Thank you, Genna. :)vocalclach

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Little Kim 13 months ago

Beautiful! Funny how we all share the same desires for someone. Though it may never happen. "How would it feel to touch his fingers,the very same fingers that strum his guitar" I can relate to this.. a certain 61 year old Rock Star that I have written about!

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vocalcoach Hub Author 13 months ago

Kim - So true. When we are creating how we feel about a certain someone, we tend to think its just us, having those feelings. I'm going to go check out your hub on the 61 yr old Rock Star. Can't wait to read your hub. Thanks Kim. :)vocalcoach

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Jackie Lynnley Level 7 Commenter 10 months ago

Great poem and you know Robert was a questionable experience for me. My mom loved him and so I saw and heard him a lot but if I liked him I couldn't tell any of my friends, lol. But you know my husband nor I cared for Frank Sinatra until s few years before his death. Now I have so much fun using people I never knew or loved and most probably not even living, music stretches far and wide the older I get.

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PegCole17 Level 7 Commenter 5 months ago

Absolutely love the song from Camelot - brings back so many lovely memories. And your poem - so rich with imagery and sweetness. The pics were perfect. Lovely!

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vocalcoach Hub Author 5 months ago

Oh, I am so happy to see you here Peg! It's been a long time since I've had a visitor. Thank you for making my day!!!

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vocalcoach Hub Author 5 months ago

Dear Jackie - I loved reading your comments. Really great! And fyi - I wrote a 3 part hub on Frank Sinatra. :) I am so darn happy to have found you here on hubpages. Cheers.

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